Well...
I'm sorry to break the chain, but I don't find this song particularly awesome.
Actually it isn't really original or more noticeable than another one. In my opinion it doesn't have a real soul, or a taste of unique.
Most of your instruments are too common in the major part of the song and have been heard a milion times before. Same remark about the transitions that unfortunately are the same from the beginning to the end : ascension and descent with some kind of "wind sound", i'm sure you got me. And introducing some real drum work as a transition would bring this song a real plus and would break the linearity of it, cause finally you've got an impression of a binar move all the way. I'm thinking about something syncopated for an example.
And the use of the cut off button and the phaser is a bit too recurrent. There are many different mecanisms you could use to make your song vary, and the use of only a few is a bit too reductive. Cause I guess you used it indeed to modify the melody and the overall, but finally, it remains too flat and too much the same on the duration. That's even more obvious cause you've got two melodic lines coming back over and over. Maybe a counter melody, a change in your drums (that you did in the second part of the song and was very well executed ; but do it more !), a work on transitions more than what you did with the wind sound, that's to the simple acceleration of drums would certainly make your song better.
Though, the main melody was original. I didn't like it in the beginning cause I got the feeling it was leading to nowhere, and a bit disturbing, but with the time I take to chose my word, I finally appreciate it because of this peculiar aspect and ending that finally gives it its weight.
And of course there are very good points in this creation. An excellent work on vertical writing, cause your melody is long and there is no mistake under it while it plays at every moment. And there's really a great work on the structure of the song. Because indeed, there are variations (even if a bit underexploited). The density is here too, and the overall is effective, I can't deny it. The long break in the middle was really a success, no doubt that it's my favorite moment.
So finally I have a mitigated opinion. You've got very good skills and melodies but you kind of spoil it by using them in a song a little bit too caricatured and flat. Still a good job with many good elements. But I'm not found of it.